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Melphor was brought into the world without parents to care for her, sent to an adoption agency once she was able to be taken care of. Her father had died during a work accident while her mother was proven to be an alcoholic and therefore, unable to take care of a young child. She stayed in different agencies during her early childhood years and was about five whenever a family came by to see her. They were nice and they seemed like they meant well, what more could Mel ask for in a family? So after a few days, they finalized the adoption and Melphor  was officially a part of the Barnes family.
 
Melphor grew a close relation with her adoptive brother, Andras, who was a few years older than her but she didn't mind. She however didn't enjoy her father as much as she hoped. To Mel, it seemed like allshe hewas wantedadopted herpurely to dobe wasa staypuppet aroundto andperform watch,as hopefullya becomingmember intriguedin by histhe merchant industryindudtry. Of course, that made her resentful, especially whenever her mother left her father, losing all hope in him as a caring person and loyal boyfriend (they weren't married, just had kids together). But she couldn't do anything about it, and ended up living her whole teenage life in that household, even after Andras moved out to live someplace else. She completely refused multiple times that she would go into the merchant business at her father's requests, which twisted the favoritism to Andras, who not only was her father’s biological son, but also, had accepted his offer in said industry. Proving this further, whenever her father eventually died, Andras got a big portion of the will. Mel realized after several years, she wouldn't be wanting this family anymore, not like she did when she was a child. It wasn't even a family, just a shell of a greedy, group of people.e.
 
Mel took off after packing, not even bothering to go to her father's funeral. She made her way to the Southeastern continent via the Alathran ports and settled in a tribal town where hercountless peopleother Axolians resided, Axolia. This town made her feel at home, and she stayed here for many years, gaining close relationships with multiple people, including those of highworld-wide rank inrespect the nation of [[Idrolia]]. Her years there led her to gain aquite respectedthe rolereputation in Axolia but she didn't particularly use it to her advantage,. Her was mind set on enjoying life, and messing around with friends, who she now knew as her new family. (Way better than the Barnes family in her opinion.)
But she couldn't do anything about it, and ended up living her whole teenage life in that household, even after Andras moved out to live someplace else. She completely refused multiple times that she would not go into the merchant business at her father's requests, which turned out to turn the favor to Andras, who not only was her father’s biological son, but also, had accepted his offer in the merchant industry. Proving this further, whenever her father eventually died, Andras got a big portion of the will, which caused Mel to finally realize she wouldn't be wanting this family anymore, not like she did when she was a child. It wasn't even a family, just a shell of a corrupted group of people.
 
Though one day, Melohor started thinking about her objective in life. To her knowledge, she didn't have one. She decided she would go off on her own, perhaps meet new people, travel around the realms. A few days later, she packed her things, said goodbye to her friendly home in Axolia, and dashed into Lake Idrolia, where she swam for miles. Well... it could've been longer if she hadn't been stopped.
Mel took off after packing, not even bothering to go to her father's funeral. She made her way to the Southeastern continent via the Alathran ports and settled in a tribal town where her people resided, Axolia. This town made her feel at home, and she stayed here for many years, gaining close relationships with multiple people, including those of high rank in the nation of [[Idrolia]]. Her years there led her to gain a respected role in Axolia but she didn't particularly use it to her advantage, mind set on enjoying life, messing around with friends, who she now knew as her new family. Way better than the Barnes family.
 
Mel felt a stabbing pain in her back as she swam in the water, getting away from the island she had begun to call home. It was late and dark, she was quite tired, but she could remember distinctly, a stab from a drowned's trident. Her senses faded and her vision became blurry, slowly sinking to the bottom. Sheand diedhitting it with a soft thud.
Though one day, she woke up out of bed with a start. It was the middle of the night but she heard screams of terror and wails of protest from outside. Apparently, not everyone enjoyed Noxx Aquasong as their chieftain and an uproar started. Mel wasn't good in combat, so she decided to run instead. Run from her problems. And it worked surprisingly well. So she thought.
 
She died.
Mel felt a stabbing pain in her back as she swam in the water, getting away from the island she had begun to call home. It was late and dark, she was quite tired, but she could remember distinctly, a stab from a drowned's trident. Her senses faded and her vision became blurry, slowly sinking to the bottom. She died.
 
== THE AFTER-DEAD ==
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